My Monster

November 9, 2011 by

I like the way I made my monster. I personally think it is the best.

The Monster walks to get a drink. He slips and hits his head. I don’t now how he slipped but I do know he is in the hospital.

The Monster’s Story

I just wanted a drink–that’s all, a drink.  I don’t now how I slipped because I got a concussion.  I woke up in a place with metal bars as walls and one window.  I was chained  to a table. I yelled for help and two soldiers came in with rifles. Boy, was I scared!

All of a sudden four doctors entered the room. They had needles and other things I can’t describe. One of the doctors stuck a needle in to my arm and I blackout out…

I woke up in a truck still tied to  the table and I wanted out so I broke the chain. Being a monster made it easy to break the chain.

I jumped out of the truck. Immediately I noticed  another truck coming but this one was diffident. It was black with big white letters they said S.W.A.T. When I hit the ground I ran. They must have seen me because I heard gun shots and there I was, running for my life.

TO BE CONTINUED        

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  1.    Ms. Tatiana said,

    on November 30th, 2011 at 1:24 pm   Reply

    Dylan,

    What an intriguing beginning! I think your monster picture is really good, too. I hope you’ll be continuing the story soon!

    I’ve included a link to your post in my “blog tour” so my students and others will be stopping by.

    Keep up the great blogging!

    Ms. Tatiana
    http://www.worldstaracademy.com

  2.    Julia said,

    on December 10th, 2011 at 4:14 am   Reply

    Dylan,
    Great monster post!
    I like your monster because it has alot of detail to it, so keep up the good work!
    Merry Christmas,
    Julia

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